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You’ve lied
And you’ve cried
And you’ve felt so alone.
So you stand in the rain,
To wash it all away.


You’ve laughed
And you’ve smiled
And you’ve giggled till you fell to the ground.
You’re having so much fun,
So you dance in the rain
To cool down
To keep you’re self on the ground.


You’ve been mean,
You’ve been rude,
Hell, you’ve broken a few hearts in one simple move.
So you twirl round and round,
In the pouring rain,
Drowning away the selfish pain.


You feel so disgraced,
And with a pale face,
You stand in the rain,
You watch it fall,
Like bits of heaven
Come to save us all.
You scream,
You shout,
You dance all about.
Raise your hands to the sky,
Wash away
The pain,
Start to feel sane.

Smile for a while,
Then laugh even longer.
Give a twinkle of you’re eye,
To the poor guy
Who’s been standing alone all night.
He’s blushing
And hiding the red stain
By running away,
Out into the rain.
But you follow,
And you show him the game
Of dancing in the rain.
©2006-2009 ~charlydateddybear
:iconcharlydateddybear:

Author's Comments

Haven't you ever noticed that dancing in the rain makes all the pain go away? I love to walk around in rain...though normaly I get sick...like right afterwards...oh well....

I'm not sure where to put my stuff...tell me if it's the right place, I really wanna know! :D

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:iconegyptian-dragon:
Wow. Your submitting a lot lately. Have a digital cookie for that! :) :cookie: I like this one alot too! Gonna fave this. :)

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"And since I am dead, I can take off my head to recite Shakesperian quotations." - Jack Skellingtom.
:iconcharlydateddybear:
REALLY? COOKIES!!!!!!! and thank you for the fave!:heart:

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Beauty is not seen through the eyes, but through the heart
:iconegyptian-dragon:
Welcome!

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"And since I am dead, I can take off my head to recite Shakesperian quotations." - Jack Skellingtom.
:iconcharlydateddybear:
:D :heart:

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Beauty is not seen through the eyes, but through the heart
:iconsakura443:
it really does, doesn't it?

especially walking barefoot in the rain. tis fun.

Lovely poem, m'dear. struck me close to home on this'n.

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If you shoot for the moon, and miss, you might still hit a yak.
- ~lyonsabre
With adulterous lips, drink up love, life, and death.
-Kazuya Minekura
:iconcharlydateddybear:
thank you! and thank you muchly for the fave!:heart:

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Beauty is not seen through the eyes, but through the heart
:iconsakura443:
<3 t'was deserved.

--
If you shoot for the moon, and miss, you might still hit a yak.
- ~lyonsabre
With adulterous lips, drink up love, life, and death.
-Kazuya Minekura
:iconcharlydateddybear:
:) thanks!

--
Beauty is not seen through the eyes, but through the heart
:iconfluffypiranas:
:D
:+fav:
*is obviously tired and has no other input. XD;*

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